cozyaromas Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 Well here it is, and I personally love it!!!! I may change the font but other than that I think it's perfect!!! Tell me what you think....please excuse the word sample going across as that will not be on the finished product. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pdevine Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 I would move the bottom 2 lines over to the left some. I would love to see it after that. HTH Portia Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cindym Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 I think it is great. Nice job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dandelion garden Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 That's lovely! I agree with you about changing the font. I like the smaller print at the bottom but don't think the big one conveys the "warm" feel you get from all the other details. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaybee23 Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 I think it is beautiful, the graphic is very bold, love it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FragileXmom Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 I like it alot, love the feeling of the fireplace and rocking chair. I agree that the bottom text should be moved to the left away from the border. The Cozy Aroma is a little big and "fat" too and I don't like the way the C touches the mantel of the fireplace. Maybe a smaller, skinnier font. But I really love your overall idea. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brenda Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 Love the shape, the colors, and the feel of the label. Great job! Have you considered sliding the "Cozy" slightly to the right so it doesn't touch the candles? They're so great looking I'd like to see all of them! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hewells Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 That is really awesome to see it go from sketch form to a finished product. I would have to agree on the font too though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kimberly Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 I think it looks great! The only thing I would change is the C touching the fireplace. Nice work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guppygirl Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 I think it's awesome too to see if from rough draft to almost finished label - how cool! Funny, I was thinking how much I liked that the tag line on the bottom wasn't centered as you would traditionally see, yet then again, this has a traditional feel to it so you may want to nudge it back. Also, I'm thinking the company name should be less thick & not touching the mantel.Great job!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tara Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 That looks great. No other suggestions for you. That was neat watching it go from a sketch to full color. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lorrie Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 I love it!! It is definitly unique.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marisa Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 Very beautiful, IMO The label is about your company name, not just the graphics, so besides detaching it from the fire place a tad .I would not change a thing about the font..It goes with the look. Go with your gut feeling too and the look you like or youll never be happy , as you know what looks good in your mind and itll be something youll love. Again great job and that was a very neat process to see. thanks for sharing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daniedb Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 I think it's great! Very impressive job! My ONLY critique is that I would remove the period after your tagline. It's not a complete sentence, so it doesn't need a period, plus, taglines generally don't call for a period. I know it's a small thing, but my eye immediately zeroed in on it, and I hate to detract from your name and your beautiful candles on the fireplace! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cozyaromas Posted March 22, 2006 Author Share Posted March 22, 2006 Thank you everyone for the kind words!!! I think it's totally amazing seeing the tranformation from pencil sketch to graphic, I think Kristal from www.peddlergraphics.com did an awesome job and I give her much Kudos for a job well done!!! I've noted minor modifications that needs to be done to the label, which I will convey to her, but overall I think it's great and I'm glad that you all felt the same. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeana Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 I love it all. I don't think it needs to be changed. I even like the words touching the fireplace and the border. It gives it kind of a 3D effect. And I think the fonts are very compatible with the feeling you are trying to convey. The font looks like the writing used a lot from the fifties. Which was a time known for family and togetherness. The colors are rich and very appealing and very unique. I saw your sketches too. I like the sketch look but this is really pretty. Great job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Candle Man Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 Where is it? I don't see a picture or anything to click on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 Me either....no attachment or anything here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
islandgirl Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 Where is it? I don't see a picture or anything to click on.Whew... Glad you and Jorden don't see it either..Thought I was having a really bad day or losing my mind.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Michi Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 Whew... Glad you and Jorden don't see it either..Thought I was having a really bad day or losing my mind....Me too!! I seriously thought that I was losin' it and was afraid to say so. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tangerine Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 Me too!! I seriously thought that I was losin' it and was afraid to say so. Kind of like The Emperor's New Clothes. Her logo was there a while ago. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alajane Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 Add me to the list that would like to see the picture but can't!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cozyaromas Posted March 23, 2006 Author Share Posted March 23, 2006 Hey guys, sorry I took it down....I was reading another thread about someone's wording was on another's person website due to a designer's error. Well as I was looking at my graphic designer's website and I saw something almost similiar to mine so I took my graphic off of this site, until I had a clarification because I didn't want to be in conflict with someone else. But everything is cleared up, just a misunderstanding. I'm sorry to keep everyone waiting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Posted March 23, 2006 Share Posted March 23, 2006 that is very nice, I would be pleased too:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luvcandletarts2 Posted March 23, 2006 Share Posted March 23, 2006 I like it alot, love the feeling of the fireplace and rocking chair. I agree that the bottom text should be moved to the left away from the border. The Cozy Aroma is a little big and "fat" too and I don't like the way the C touches the mantel of the fireplace. Maybe a smaller, skinnier font. But I really love your overall idea.I agree with Fragile and really like your logo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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