It's not bad for your first try. On it's on, it's pretty anyway.To get the swirl, I really think it would've worked better if you had used a round mold. The key seems to be for the rings to touch the mold in some places, but not all. While I just love your mold and can't wait until I can get one for me, the corrugated surface keeps the color rings from show dark. For the rings, you may want a few less dark ones. I don't remember the exact ratios she used in the tutorial, but I used 3:2:1 I think. 3 white to 2 pale color to 1 dark color times how every many needed to fill it up. I have to say, your first came much closer than mine!