DolphinLVR Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 Hello all!Attached you will see our logo and we wanted to have a slogan underneath our name. What do you all think of " Let Our Fragrances Flutter Throughout Your Home" ?Jeff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joyofsoycandle Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 I think it fits perfectly! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spellkast Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 A wonderful slogan! It goes very well with your Logo! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
perlgoodies Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 I think it sounds too forced and it doesn't flow smoothly. It's the "throughout" that's hurting it.Let Our Fragrances Flutter Throughout Your HomePerhaps something along the lines of:Fluttering fragrances for your homeIt's smoother but I think it still needs work.Hope this helps. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scented Posted November 22, 2005 Share Posted November 22, 2005 Perhaps fragrances that flutter through your home Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DolphinLVR Posted November 22, 2005 Author Share Posted November 22, 2005 Perhaps fragrances that flutter through your homeI Like That Scented..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tlc26 Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 or fill your home with our fluttering frangrancesor Our fluttering fragrances will fill your homeor The fragrances that flutterok I guess they are all weak! Sorry I tried. I love the butterfly!!!!!!!!!!!!1ok the more I read/say it, the more I like Fragrances that flutter! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daniedb Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 I really like the concept, but I'm also just not getting the flow - it's too much, I'm afraid you're going to lose too many readers halfway through, like, "Let our fragrances flutter thr...yaddayaddayadda..."Fragrances that flutter through the homeOr even justLet our Fragrances Flutter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terrie Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 I think it's a bit too long for a tagline/slogan. I'd shorten it up a bit with one of the suggestions above. :smiley2: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BruceCarvesWax Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 I have a candle that I named "tell me this don't stink" Maybe I could use that for my logo? Really, its a nice scent. Bruce Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fire and Ice Posted November 23, 2005 Share Posted November 23, 2005 If I were you, I'd get out the Thasourious and see if you could find a better word than flutter. Scents don't flutter, they travel but they don't flutter. I think if you work on, you can certainly find a better slogen. JMO:tiptoe: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sockmonkey Posted November 24, 2005 Share Posted November 24, 2005 I am super critical of things like this because of my background in communications and printing industries, so my opinion may not be the same as everyone else's. I think I understand the concept you're going for, but I think it's not hitting the mark because of the choice of words--more particularly, the word "flutter." Unfortunately, I don't have any fantastic options for you.When I associate the word flutter with candles, I think of flickering or sputtering flames, and a scent that is weak, or uneven throughout the candle.I tried to come up with any connection to butterfly and found this site of butterfly quotes and poetry, and thought perhaps it would help you or someone else come up with something appropriate.ttp://www.rosebriar.uk.com/garden/butterfly.htmlAfter reading some of the poems, I thought of the word "flow" instead of flutter.Chrysalis Candles...Scents that flow with wonder and beautyorChrysalis Candles...Scented with wonder and beauty. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DolphinLVR Posted November 24, 2005 Author Share Posted November 24, 2005 I am super critical of things like this because of my background in communications and printing industries, so my opinion may not be the same as everyone else's. I think I understand the concept you're going for, but I think it's not hitting the mark because of the choice of words--more particularly, the word "flutter." Unfortunately, I don't have any fantastic options for you.When I associate the word flutter with candles, I think of flickering or sputtering flames, and a scent that is weak, or uneven throughout the candle.I tried to come up with any connection to butterfly and found this site of butterfly quotes and poetry, and thought perhaps it would help you or someone else come up with something appropriate.ttp://www.rosebriar.uk.com/garden/butterfly.htmlAfter reading some of the poems, I thought of the word "flow" instead of flutter.Chrysalis Candles...Scents that flow with wonder and beautyorChrysalis Candles...Scented with wonder and beauty.I am sure glad I posted this to the board for review....Sock, I really like those two options you threw out there. They really fit the elegance that we want to convey to our customers. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sockmonkey Posted November 24, 2005 Share Posted November 24, 2005 Thank you. I'm glad you liked them. Maybe they can be improved upon too.I just thought of another one--Chrysalis Candles...Scents of wonder and beauty. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
debscent Posted November 24, 2005 Share Posted November 24, 2005 I don't like quirky tag lines (not that yours was), but I think this one by Sock is very nice and elegant. Can we see your packaging too? I like simplistic elegance and that is what I "see" when I see your butterfly.Thank you. I'm glad you liked them. Maybe they can be improved upon too.I just thought of another one--Chrysalis Candles...Scents of wonder and beauty. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MommaD Posted November 26, 2005 Share Posted November 26, 2005 There's wayyyy to much alliteration there. Think of Sally sells Seashells. You have too many words that begin with identical sounds. It would confuse people, and they would get frustrated with it.I do like some of the other suggestions, I just have none to submit of my own. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brenda Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 First time posting to this board after days of lurking. I'm a soaper, not a candlemaker, but do you see any possibilities here? Chrysalis Candles - Scents UnfurledChrysalis Candles - Scents to SavorChrysalis Candles - Whispers of BeautyChrysalis Candles - Auras of ChangeChrysalis Candles - Aromatic DelightsChrysalis Candles - Fragrances of TransformationChrysalis Candles - Soaring Scents of BeautyChrysalis Candles - Wafting WondersI enjoy naming things. Didn't say I'm good at it you notice! Just enjoy the process. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StacysScentsations(DH) Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 whats wrong with "Fluttering Frangrances" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prairieannie Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 First time posting to this board after days of lurking. I'm a soaper, not a candlemaker, but do you see any possibilities here? Chrysalis Candles - Scents UnfurledChrysalis Candles - Scents to SavorChrysalis Candles - Whispers of BeautyChrysalis Candles - Auras of ChangeChrysalis Candles - Aromatic DelightsChrysalis Candles - Fragrances of TransformationChrysalis Candles - Soaring Scents of BeautyChrysalis Candles - Wafting WondersI enjoy naming things. Didn't say I'm good at it you notice! Just enjoy the process.Wow, I think some of these are really good! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DolphinLVR Posted November 27, 2005 Author Share Posted November 27, 2005 Wow, I think some of these are really good!I agree! I thank everyone for their thoughts and suggestions! I am going to mull it over and decide what we need to do. Gotta get it decided upon soon as our website will be up fairly soon.Jeff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eugenia Posted November 27, 2005 Share Posted November 27, 2005 Let your spirits soar with Chrysalis Candles Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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