Ilona Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 I', trying to figure out packaging for my B&B stuff and it's been hard. This is the packaging for the perfumes, hair glosses and other liquid/sprayer products. Do you think it is too boring? The label is very small 1"x1.5". Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadryga Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 I think it looks fine actually, quite upscale.If you'd like something more exciting, maybe add an abstract design of some sort to the label? A photo background may just be too busy for such a small area.Alternatively, you could play around with the font. Right now your font is simple serifs and sans serifs. Maybe something curvy for "Pink Sugar"?I could do a few drafts for you, but probably not at the moment... it's 6.49am, need to get some shuteye! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katshe Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 I think your label is nice and sharp. I would keep it being as it is so small...don't want too much on there.I must ask...do you have a busi name? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mystical_angel1219 Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 I like it, because it's simple and classy. Good job!I also would suggest a bolder, curvier font for Pink Sugar. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brenda Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 Tastefully simple label that goes well with the closure you've selected for your bottle! I like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jbren Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 Stunning just the way it is! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickie1st Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 I think it looks very classy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kelly Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 I too like it and think the picture is perfect. I wish I could get my pics to look that professional! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soapbuddy Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 I like it the way it is.It's also easy to read.Is the label glossy?Irena Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grumpy Girl Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 I think a clear label with a bigger font might look better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadryga Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 Hmmm... clear label would make it a little hard to read, methinks... especially since it's 1 X 1.5Katshe, I think the business name is CocoaPink, it's in her sig, though there's a slight code error there.http://www.cocoapink.netEDIT: Just checked out her range, most of her stuff isn't out yet, but I'm liking the concept so far! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lisajo Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 Love the bottle and the simple label BUT I was confused about Cocoa Pink and Pink Sugar at first :embarasse Maybe the scent name can be on one line (vs two) immediately followed by product description (perfume spray).Those perfume bottles and closures are fab. I have some too and love them :highfive: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elitenaildesign Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 I love it, very upscale looking. But the two sugars in there would be confusing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaybyrd Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 I like it, especially if any of the products will be tinted. If you want more decoration, you could use different colored caps if they're available. Nice job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ilona Posted July 18, 2007 Author Share Posted July 18, 2007 I think it looks fine actually, quite upscale.If you'd like something more exciting, maybe add an abstract design of some sort to the label? A photo background may just be too busy for such a small area.Alternatively, you could play around with the font. Right now your font is simple serifs and sans serifs. Maybe something curvy for "Pink Sugar"?I could do a few drafts for you, but probably not at the moment... it's 6.49am, need to get some shuteye! Sure that would be lovely! I like seeing what other people come up with No rush too. Take you time!Thanks!And thanks to everyone else. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ilona Posted July 18, 2007 Author Share Posted July 18, 2007 Grumpy:I tried a clear label but it was hard to see. I'm using a clear label on the back for the ingredients. A bigger font won't fit as that's as big as I could get it. Unless you mean to enlarge the scent name? I could probably do that - but I do like my white space. :embarasse The bottle is 1x1.5 so it's pretty small.I love the sprayers too but they are sooooo pricey! I need to find them for less than TSW, if anyone sees them let me know!It's a matte waterproof laser paper. I like the matte papers.Would the flourish script look good with other scents? or only flourish the pink sugar? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Penny Posted July 19, 2007 Share Posted July 19, 2007 You've done a great job. Your website is unique and fresh. Keep up the great work. I felt like I had walked through the door of an upscale boutique. Mmmm--I like. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smacky Posted July 19, 2007 Share Posted July 19, 2007 I personally like it, its simple and elegant. The ONLY thing I would change is the font for your fragrance name.BRAVO! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadryga Posted July 20, 2007 Share Posted July 20, 2007 There, did a few drafts. Just rough ones though, I duplicated your template since I didn't have the original Original & Edwardian script (I uhh.. forgot to center the words for the Ed script)A few other quick drafts, you can see the different effects of different fonts here(Edwardian script is centered here)From L-R: Gigi, Edwardian script, Freestyle, Curlz MT, Kuntsler script, Rage ItalicI didn't change much from your original template, cos well, it looked perfectly fine to me other than the "Pink Sugar" font. There's "SAMPLE" watermarked on the fonts to protect your design. If you'd like any of them just let me know and I'll e-mail you the original. I'm also not quite sure what font you used for "CocoaPink" so I used Berling Antiqua :embarasseBy the way, are you sure the labels are 1 X 1.5? At a quick glance it doesn't seem to be 1.5" high to me... more like 1.25". The options I made are 1 X 1.5 and you can see a slight difference in proportion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenScentU Posted July 20, 2007 Share Posted July 20, 2007 I really like the look. I would keep it simple and maybe just make Pink Sugar a little bit larger size. I like easy to read labels. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaybyrd Posted July 20, 2007 Share Posted July 20, 2007 :highfive: Wow, What a difference a font can make! They look great and depending which one you use can change the whole "feel" of the product. I like the Gigi and the Edwardian script best & equally. Gigi if you're looking for a more daytime/funtime/teenager approach, and Edwardian for more feminine/classy/sexy approach. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prettyinpink Posted July 20, 2007 Share Posted July 20, 2007 I agree with the others that is a very nice and classy label. Keep as it is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elegantnaturals Posted July 21, 2007 Share Posted July 21, 2007 I like the Edwardian script the best too since the overall design is more sophisticated/elegant. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soapbuddy Posted July 21, 2007 Share Posted July 21, 2007 I like the Edwardian script too.Irena Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ilona Posted July 21, 2007 Author Share Posted July 21, 2007 OMG!!! This is so perfect! Wow. You are amazingly talented. That is so lovely.I think I'd use that on all of them, if it is OK with you.Can I send you a thank you gift? Wow.There, did a few drafts. Just rough ones though, I duplicated your template since I didn't have the original Original & Edwardian script (I uhh.. forgot to center the words for the Ed script)A few other quick drafts, you can see the different effects of different fonts here(Edwardian script is centered here)From L-R: Gigi, Edwardian script, Freestyle, Curlz MT, Kuntsler script, Rage ItalicI didn't change much from your original template, cos well, it looked perfectly fine to me other than the "Pink Sugar" font. There's "SAMPLE" watermarked on the fonts to protect your design. If you'd like any of them just let me know and I'll e-mail you the original. I'm also not quite sure what font you used for "CocoaPink" so I used Berling Antiqua :embarasseBy the way, are you sure the labels are 1 X 1.5? At a quick glance it doesn't seem to be 1.5" high to me... more like 1.25". The options I made are 1 X 1.5 and you can see a slight difference in proportion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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