prairieannie Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 A or B? Give it to me straight...even if you HATE it! This is AThis is BThanks a Bunch Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MooChelle Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 ummm I know I've already had a rough night.....But those look exactly the same to me.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blest2BAmerican Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 Go to bed Moo, they are different! I like #1 better than number 2. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashlie K Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 Moochelle if you look at the 2nd one, it has the name of the company in shadow.I like #2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prairieannie Posted July 29, 2005 Author Share Posted July 29, 2005 seriously? The second one has little gray sagebrush junctions on it LMAO..at least I can see 'em.. you can't see em? oh boy. That tells me a lot actually hehe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MooChelle Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 Trust me babe...If I could go to bed on the job...I would..In a heartbeat..lol Guess it is just this POS monitor...I don't see the shadow.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
topofmurrayhill Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 A - but really neither.I wouldn't do the product name in the same font as your logo. The logo is colorful and distinctive, but I would opt for an attractive yet more restrained black font for the product name and get some contrast. If you need 2 lines for the product name I'd suggest "moisturizing" on the first line and "body cream" on the second as it would read a little better. Finally, I'd get rid of the "by" and just put the logo above the product name instead of beneath.Hope I didn't make you sorry you asked. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prairieannie Posted July 29, 2005 Author Share Posted July 29, 2005 A - but really neither.I wouldn't do the product name in the same font as your logo. The logo is colorful and distinctive, but I would opt for an attractive yet more restrained black font for the product name and get some contrast. If you need 2 lines for the product name I'd suggest "moisturizing" on the first line and "body cream" on the second as it would read a little better. Finally, I'd get rid of the "by" and just put the logo above the product name instead of beneath.Hope I didn't make you sorry you asked.Absolutely not! I appreciate honesty like that. I've looked at this one for so dang long that I can't be objective anymore. This particular label isn't for my main line of products..it's for a girlie little sideline and for now, it's temporary. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sherie Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 I agree with the suggestion from topofmurrayhill! I think it would really catch the eye that way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
topofmurrayhill Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 I neglected to mention I think the sagebrush junction logo is very nice. The rule though is that you don't ever use your logo font as a body font or anything else. Despite the saying that rules were made to be broken, it's generally a bad idea to break this one. The product name in a black font would actually eliminate monotony and make the design more interesting. Plus the heart in the logo is black and that will help tie it all together. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sharyl55 Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 I agree with topofmurrayhill. I learned a couple of things from her comments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prairieannie Posted July 29, 2005 Author Share Posted July 29, 2005 I neglected to mention I think the sagebrush junction logo is very nice. The rule though is that you don't ever use your logo font as a body font or anything else. Despite the saying that rules were made to be broken, it's generally a bad idea to break this one. The product name in a black font would actually eliminate monotony and make the design more interesting. Plus the heart in the logo is black and that will help tie it all together.Got any font style ideas? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drcobane Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 HiThat is comic sans Right? With outline. I would stick with that font use the black idea and since it is for younger market add a pink out line to make it a contrast anwith the heart that should be stellar.Your logo may be a ludica hand writen font same size which I estimate about about 20pnt No outline on the logo either a nice pink if dark label or black Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meredith_D Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 I wouldn't do the product name in the same font as your logo. The logo is colorful and distinctive, but I would opt for an attractive yet more restrained black font for the product name and get some contrast. .Ditto. Also, I would leave out the shadows. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prairieannie Posted July 29, 2005 Author Share Posted July 29, 2005 HiThat is comic sans Right? With outline. I would stick with that font use the black idea and since it is for younger market add a pink out line to make it a contrast anwith the heart that should be stellar.Your logo may be a ludica hand writen font same size which I estimate about about 20pnt No outline on the logo either a nice pink if dark label or blackNot comic sans..it's not even close actually. But I like the ideas that you and everyone have thrown out there so far..too bad I'm at work now and can't work on it some more..but in between dipping critters tonight I'm planning to try them ALL just to see what happens Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scented Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 I like Top's suggestions Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
topofmurrayhill Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 I agree with topofmurrayhill. I learned a couple of things from her comments.his comments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freezin Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 Another victim for our calendar....muhahahahaha : ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
topofmurrayhill Posted July 29, 2005 Share Posted July 29, 2005 Got any font style ideas?Don't quite have time to study fonts at the moment so nothing specific in mind, but here are a few general ideas about what I'd probably look for:1 - Go with something quite distinct from the logo font and not too heavy. The font typeface has fat characters so maybe look for something a touch more delicate.2 - Something more restrained than the logo font. You don't want 2 totally decorative fonts competing for attention. It will be more elegant and tasteful with a plainer font for the product name, which is not to say that it has to be boring.3 - The logo is a little wide so I'd go with a slightly condensed font style for the product name. If the letters are a little more tall versus wide compared to the logo font, I think it will probably look more interesting and avoid any horizontal monotony. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prairieannie Posted July 29, 2005 Author Share Posted July 29, 2005 Thanks Mr. Topofmurrayhill I'm getting anxious to work on it some more tonight~ alerted hubby to the fact that we're having leftover lasagna and not to expect me to cook anything I'm visualizing something new thanks to you, so hopefully I can get it on the drawing board! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prairieannie Posted July 30, 2005 Author Share Posted July 30, 2005 Okay, here's one re-do! Improvement, or no? If not, help! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LauraInNY Posted July 30, 2005 Share Posted July 30, 2005 I like this one much better. If you want the logo to be on the bottom, I would make it a little bit larger and the product name a little bit smaller. When you look at the label, you see the product 1st and not the logo. I like it a lot better though, you are on the right track.forgot to say - I like your choice of font for the product name. It is a nice contrast to your logo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynda3811 Posted July 30, 2005 Share Posted July 30, 2005 Just playing and tried this for you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prairieannie Posted July 30, 2005 Author Share Posted July 30, 2005 Okay, here's one with the product name smaller...i do like this better! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prairieannie Posted July 30, 2005 Author Share Posted July 30, 2005 I like that font for the product name too Lynda! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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