von691 Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 This is the label I have for my bath salts. Could someone let me know if this is the correct way to do the label? Anything I need to change? Sorry if the pic is too big. I have a time getting them the right size. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobinInOR Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 You should use 'fragrance' instead of 'scent'.You need to use the actual name of the color - for ex. Green 3, not just a general color statement.You need your city/state/zip on the label, and your street address if you aren't in the yellow pages..Other than those legal things, it looks nice! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SnowCow Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 does it need weight (ounces) too? i remember that thread a while ago about needing the weight on candles. not too sure about BB. it's a nice label! i like that font. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeana Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 That picture is so pretty!I think I would make the ingredients font smaller, and bring down your biz address and phone # down toward the bottom. Maybe put what fragrance the salts are above or below the soothing part. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobinInOR Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Yup, needs net weight. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pdevine Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 In addition to the other suggestions I would put your title either in parenthesses or a ! afterwards to make it stand out. HTH Portia Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
von691 Posted October 21, 2005 Author Share Posted October 21, 2005 Thanks for everyones help. Will correct and repost when I get done.TIA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scentlady Posted October 22, 2005 Share Posted October 22, 2005 I know you have to have ingredients on the label but is your address a legla requirement? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeana Posted October 22, 2005 Share Posted October 22, 2005 This one looks much better, more professional. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roxie Posted October 22, 2005 Share Posted October 22, 2005 I think it looks fab! the only suggestion I would have is to list it as "net wt 11 oz"....it looks off for some reason the way you have it (could be me lol). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sockmonkey Posted October 23, 2005 Share Posted October 23, 2005 It's an attractive label. I like the teal lettering--it really stands out on the label, and the artwork is very pretty.From a graphic designer's point of view, I would bring down the "net weight" information line to make it level with the last line of text on the left side of the label to give it a more balanced look. I would also move it to the right slightly so that the right edge of it is in alignment with the art above it.I would add the word "Directions:" in front of "pour desired amount..."I would also probably reduce the leading (spacing) between the lines of your address, as well as the ingredients.All very minor changes, but since you asked....! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted October 23, 2005 Share Posted October 23, 2005 Looking better. Personally, I would like to see the ingredients and nt wt in a straight font like Century Gothic. All that script is just running together for me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SatinDucky Posted October 24, 2005 Share Posted October 24, 2005 I think it looks very pretty!I agree with adding "Directions" in fornt of pour...Personally I would put a suggested amount to use. "Desired" is a rather difficult amount to guess at, especially if you've never used them before. Until I found this board, I had no idea how much is used, since I've never bought them myself. Ok, honestly, I still don't know how much is used...LOL. It's like... is 1 tsp enough and 1/2 cup too much? JMO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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