mysticglow Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 This is a new container and label that I'm trying out. I want it to be simple but kind of elegant too. I'm not happy with the label at all. Tell me what's not working please. Any and all suggestions welcome. Don't hold back. Also, adding a pic of the yummy butter.Just added another picture .... What do you think?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sharyl55 Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 I don't do B&B so maybe this is typical but I want to see the company name / logo on the label. Maybe increase the size of the scent and decrease the size of Body Butter. Does everyone who will see your jar know what body butter is used for? Maybe say Body Butter for softer skin or whatever. Nothing on your label pops out and says buy me. It all depends on how you market your products. If you are selling at shows or farmers market so you can explain the uses, etc it probably isn't important. But if you plan on selling this in a store you need something that grabs the customer's eye. JMHO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lasilva Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 All you can really read on the label is " Body Butter" I don't have a business but, I shop alot . The things that I want to know about a body butter would be like, " with shea and mango " , "100% natural", "handmade"," made with calming lavender". Those are the types of things that would peak more interest in your product. Right now where I live, everybody is after the natural, handmade &oh" organic! "( I forgot that one) products. One more thing maybe a little color on the label ? Oh,The butter looks fabulous Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elle110 Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 I would add company name, make body butter smaller, add if it is 100% shea etc. I love black and white labels, I go for more of the pharmaceutcal (spellling) look, but you need more info on the label. I didn't notice but you can add fragrance, you have to have weight etcElleEDIT: I see you have the fragrance listed. Maybe put company name where the fragrance is listed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobinInOR Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 I like simple. I'll assume all the other required things are on the back label.It needs a bit of a design to catch the eye. Maybe a border or a rectangle on one side, or a stripe of color at the top or bottom. What do all your other product labels look like? Do they have a color you could pull in for a stripe, or a design that could be done in outline form and softened? A design doesn't have to be much, it can just be a line that grabs the eye.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
butterfly Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 Very nice! Only suggestion I have would be to add "handpoured" & Co. Name.Butter looks yummy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jwahlton Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 I like it. I don't think that you need your logo on the front, as long as you have it on the back label with the ingredients. Also on the "back" label you will need to list the INCI of the ingredients in order. Like Robin said, maybe a border around the label but I don't think you need anything else. Most people who are looking for body butter knows what it is but on the back you could put a blurb about how to use it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mysticglow Posted January 19, 2006 Author Share Posted January 19, 2006 Thank you all for your feedback. This one is still a work in progress as the butter isn't quite ready to sell yet either but I wanted to get a label designed and ready for when it is. All info such as ingredients, directions of use and all my company info will be on the back of the jar. I really want to keep the front label clean (if that makes any sense) but it's just not popping like I wanted it to. I may try adding a border or something that will draw the customers in. Great suggestions! I will post a new picture once I'm done tweaking the label. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maltesima Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 I like it, too, it is simple and effective...however, have you thought of maybe a pastel color for the background instead of a border.....Just my thoughts.Your butter looks YUMMY! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mysticglow Posted January 20, 2006 Author Share Posted January 20, 2006 Second round on the label design. What do you think about this one? Still seems too plain to me but want to hear what others think too. Thanks for your feedback. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monica Posted January 20, 2006 Share Posted January 20, 2006 I love the second one..classic with a splash of color!Definately eye catching for me! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sad72 Posted January 21, 2006 Share Posted January 21, 2006 I, personally, think the second label looks pretty good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guppygirl Posted January 21, 2006 Share Posted January 21, 2006 Much better! That's exactly what your label needed IMHO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brenda Posted January 21, 2006 Share Posted January 21, 2006 That's a fantastic improvement! More interesting visually. It's nice! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TerriWV Posted January 21, 2006 Share Posted January 21, 2006 I really like the new one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beth-VT Posted January 21, 2006 Share Posted January 21, 2006 Much improved Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elle110 Posted January 21, 2006 Share Posted January 21, 2006 I can't believe how much that little bit of editing changed everything...looks good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meredith_D Posted January 21, 2006 Share Posted January 21, 2006 I love the Mystic Glow font! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest EMercier Posted January 22, 2006 Share Posted January 22, 2006 Very Nice. I do like the update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cindym Posted January 22, 2006 Share Posted January 22, 2006 Love it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tlc26 Posted January 22, 2006 Share Posted January 22, 2006 definately like the second one. It is simple enough and yet classy! I like the fonts. The tag line doesn't do it for me though. Are your products mysterious? Thumbs up! Nice label! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnitaG Posted January 22, 2006 Share Posted January 22, 2006 It looks yummy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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