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I was looking at the tarts, though, and you are calling them soy tarts. They look like palm wax to me. I tried out a palm wax a couple of years ago and my tarts came out looking exactly like that...a nice feather palm. Is it a blend of soy and palm? You might want to be a bit more specific in your description of them.

Nice website overall. :)

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First thing that strikes me is the drop shadow on your Germantown title. It was a bit hard to read your name. My suggestion is to take the drop shadow and lighten it a bit and bring it in tighter to the letters. I recognize the photoshop tool you used and it has its good side, but I think it was overdone slightly and distracts a bit.

A good crisp company name makes a big difference.

Good job, best wishes.

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