ladysj Posted February 20, 2009 Share Posted February 20, 2009 Well after having to start all over again from scratch I think it's ready or as close as it can be for now. Please have a look and let me know what you think. I will be adding more products I just wanted to get it back up and running and back out there again.On the marquee I don't like it being the same color as the other text so I'm trying to find out on the wahm forum how to change the color and size.I was able to change it to white what do you think?Thanks for looking.http://southernscentsofarkansas.wahmweb.com/store/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kountrytimes Posted February 20, 2009 Share Posted February 20, 2009 Looking very nice! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SliverOfWax Posted February 20, 2009 Share Posted February 20, 2009 It looks very nice. The white marquee looks OK. Makes it stand out. Besides, it's not permanent, so white is fine, imo.Edited to add: On the marquee, you need a semi-colon or something after Grand Opening Sale....You also need a period after "coffee" and the n in "no" needs to be uppercase.a cup of coffee no need to be in a hurry here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Camay Posted February 20, 2009 Share Posted February 20, 2009 Congatulations for getting your web site up!Some of the pictures are out of focus (the silky milk bath, the air fresheners, for example). Also there are some minor typos and run-on sentences (in the Sore Muscle Cream description, for example). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SliverOfWax Posted February 20, 2009 Share Posted February 20, 2009 Found another:warming,cooling affect Should be "effect".And the following should be "used". like grandma use to make. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bells4shells Posted February 20, 2009 Share Posted February 20, 2009 I think it looks good. You've made a really nice use of the frames and don't have all kinds of different sliders to move here or there like I've seen on some sites. It's really easy to navigate and I like the neutral colors.My only critique? If you're going to have the option to click on images to make them 'larger' - they need to be larger when I click on them. Otherwise, glad to see you're up and running again! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karen Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 Don't have a lot of time to peruse your site, but on the soap page you state "Goat is wonderful for the skin...." and I'm guessing that you meant to say goat milk? Also, to make "dermatologist" and "mica" plural, you do not use an apostrophe. I love the colors you used on your site. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mountain_Annie Posted February 24, 2009 Share Posted February 24, 2009 Yeah...what they said. (grin) Looks nice otherwise. I REALLY love the fonts used on your banner. Is that a fairly common font? It looks very nice! Good luck with your site! ~Mt Annie~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bwc Posted February 27, 2009 Share Posted February 27, 2009 Get someone who knows something about grammar to go over your website. You need to come across as a professional, not someone who can't pass an English class.People will either love your website and want to buy from you or they will see the errors and close the page. You may have wonderful products, but I would not buy from you based on your website. Make your website professional so you can sell them! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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