candlegrl Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 Okay I am working on this new website for my sister. NOW it is not done so I just want to know what you all think so far I should have it completed by tomarrow. http://www.candlesbythebay.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Late Night Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 The link didn't work for me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
candlegrl Posted September 11, 2007 Author Share Posted September 11, 2007 The link didn't work for me. It is fixed LOL I was typing to fast Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justrightcandles Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 how many oz are in the bag of melts?I LOVE the clear labels on the soaps Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaliZona Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 We hand pour each candle my hand which makes us unique. Should be by hand. Looks very nice! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaliZona Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 You need to take the www.http:// out of your link.HTH Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
candlegrl Posted September 11, 2007 Author Share Posted September 11, 2007 how many oz are in the bag of melts?There is 7 melts in the bag. I am working on the site now adding and all that good stuff Isn't the site pretty? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
candlegrl Posted September 11, 2007 Author Share Posted September 11, 2007 We hand pour each candle my hand which makes us unique. Should be by hand. Looks very nice!Thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
candlegrl Posted September 11, 2007 Author Share Posted September 11, 2007 how many oz are in the bag of melts?I LOVE the clear labels on the soapsThanks to Grumpy She did a wonderful job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justrightcandles Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 There is 7 melts in the bag. I am working on the site now adding and all that good stuff Isn't the site pretty?VERY, love the clear labels Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
birdieluvr76 Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 I love the labels too. The site looks very nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel91805 Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 I hope you don't mind....I found a few grammer/spelling issues. On your About Us page:We are home based business growing into retail stores soon. Should read "We are a home based business...." "We make our products with the best product on the market and take pride in out work." Well...the word "product" is in that sentence too many times, and it should be pride in OUR work, not out. Maybe something like "We take pride in our work, using only the best products on the market." Just a thought. (I'm an English/Accounting major so don't shoot me.)"We hope you will enjoy our products as much as our family,friends and of coarse us" First, "coarse" should should be course, unless they are rough! LOL. But I think it would read better as "We hope you will enjoy our products as much as we do!" And there is no punctuation at the end of your sentence, only a smiley face. On your candles/melts it says...."Our candles are hand poured with a lovely blend of soy/palm wax mixed with finest in fragrance." Doesn't flow right at the end. Maybe "Our candles are hand poured with a lovely blend of soy/palm wax and mixed with the finest of fragrances.":tiptoe: I'm going to go back under my rock now....Donna Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
candlegrl Posted September 11, 2007 Author Share Posted September 11, 2007 I hope you don't mind....I found a few grammer/spelling issues. On your About Us page:We are home based business growing into retail stores soon. Should read "We are a home based business....""We make our products with the best product on the market and take pride in out work." Well...the word "product" is in that sentence too many times, and it should be pride in OUR work, not out. Maybe something like "We take pride in our work, using only the best products on the market." Just a thought. (I'm an English/Accounting major so don't shoot me.)"We hope you will enjoy our products as much as our family,friends and of coarse us" First, "coarse" should should be course, unless they are rough! LOL. But I think it would read better as "We hope you will enjoy our products as much as we do!" And there is no punctuation at the end of your sentence, only a smiley face. On your candles/melts it says...."Our candles are hand poured with a lovely blend of soy/palm wax mixed with finest in fragrance."Doesn't flow right at the end. Maybe "Our candles are hand poured with a lovely blend of soy/palm wax and mixed with the finest of fragrances.":tiptoe: I'm going to go back under my rock now....DonnaLOL Thank you I know I am on there now fixing things there is alot that I am working on. Like I said I will be done tomarrow.:tiptoe: I'm going to go back under my rock now.... Good Idea LOL Just kidding Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thesoapbox Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 I really like this one as well!I love the labels too!!Angi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prairieannie Posted September 11, 2007 Share Posted September 11, 2007 I love the unique layout of this site and the colors are very soothing and peaceful! It's beautiful. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
candlegrl Posted September 11, 2007 Author Share Posted September 11, 2007 I hope you don't mind....I found a few grammer/spelling issues. On your About Us page:We are home based business growing into retail stores soon. Should read "We are a home based business....""We make our products with the best product on the market and take pride in out work." Well...the word "product" is in that sentence too many times, and it should be pride in OUR work, not out. Maybe something like "We take pride in our work, using only the best products on the market." Just a thought. (I'm an English/Accounting major so don't shoot me.)"We hope you will enjoy our products as much as our family,friends and of coarse us" First, "coarse" should should be course, unless they are rough! LOL. But I think it would read better as "We hope you will enjoy our products as much as we do!" And there is no punctuation at the end of your sentence, only a smiley face. On your candles/melts it says...."Our candles are hand poured with a lovely blend of soy/palm wax mixed with finest in fragrance."Doesn't flow right at the end. Maybe "Our candles are hand poured with a lovely blend of soy/palm wax and mixed with the finest of fragrances.":tiptoe: I'm going to go back under my rock now....DonnaOkay you are hired. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BLSoaps Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 I thought the site was beautifully done. The pictures are excellent. The layout is nice and friendly. I'd love to see a wonderful product photo displayed on the home page, but I bet you have that in the works already! I only had one thing that seemed a little off to me. All the pictures of the candles and melts were done in pink. Now I love pink! Too much! I usually have to force myself away from my Red & Pink colorants when I'm making soap, because I love making pink soaps. Anyway... I'd have loved to have seen a variety of colors used in the candle pictures. If you're wanting to stay consistent with the color, I'd recommend something that compliments the site's colors a little better. The pink, to me at least, wasn't the best color choice to blend with the site on a whole.But everything else was fabulous! I can't wait to see how it all looks when it's completely done! So be sure to let us know! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
candlegrl Posted September 12, 2007 Author Share Posted September 12, 2007 I thought the site was beautifully done. The pictures are excellent. The layout is nice and friendly. I'd love to see a wonderful product photo displayed on the home page, but I bet you have that in the works already! I only had one thing that seemed a little off to me. All the pictures of the candles and melts were done in pink. Now I love pink! Too much! I usually have to force myself away from my Red & Pink colorants when I'm making soap, because I love making pink soaps. Anyway... I'd have loved to have seen a variety of colors used in the candle pictures. If you're wanting to stay consistent with the color, I'd recommend something that compliments the site's colors a little better. The pink, to me at least, wasn't the best color choice to blend with the site on a whole.But everything else was fabulous! I can't wait to see how it all looks when it's completely done! So be sure to let us know!I know your right about the product photo for the splash page it is in the works I also will change the candle color any suggestions?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tangerine Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 For this"Our candles are hand poured with a lovely blend of soy/palm wax and mixed with the finest of fragrances."and the other descriptions I would remove the quotation marks. Maybe also change "blend of soy/palm wax" to "blend of soy and palm waxes"? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinMom Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 site looks great! love the labels too. I really like the lids on your madison jars, I hate buying candles that dont have some sort of protection on the top, otherwise they get dust in them. Nice job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BLSoaps Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 I know your right about the product photo for the splash page it is in the works I also will change the candle color any suggestions??I"m not sure. I kept thinking about what to recommend to put in. You don't want something that will disappear, or blend too much into the color scheme. Something that still pops, but coordinates with the color palette better than the pink did.... Unfortunately, my tired brain doesn't want to come up with any suggestions tonight. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tizimarezie Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 Light or medium blue combined with brown tones is very soothing.----------------------------www.aromafieldscandles.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holly Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 Very nice! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wendy Shoofitz Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 Very pretty. Your candles don't have to match the colors of the site. They look perfect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
so-soy Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 Now that's a beautiful website! Very professional looking. Great job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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