shell1226 Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 After a making a few changes based on suggestions from testers, I've changed my labels a little and would like your honest opinions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sheila sullivan Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 They look really nice...if it were me, I'd make the body beautiful collection bigger..and enlarge that clover picture and maybe put the letters inside the picture...make your text box white if you have a hard time getting the lettering to show. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobinInOR Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 I like it. It might be more dramatic if something was larger somewhere, like Sheila said. It looks like it's all one size, and your eye isn't drawn to anything special.Also, just a technical, you need your city,state,zip on your label. If you're in the phone book w/ your biz name - if not, you need your street addy as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shell1226 Posted September 22, 2005 Author Share Posted September 22, 2005 Thanks guys. I didn't know that about the street address Robyn. I'll fix that immediately. I will try to make that picture bigger and put the scent name inside and see how that looks. Great idea. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shell1226 Posted September 22, 2005 Author Share Posted September 22, 2005 Is this better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mysticglow Posted September 22, 2005 Share Posted September 22, 2005 I'm liking that one much better! :highfive: You did good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Shell1226 Secret Buddy Posted September 22, 2005 Share Posted September 22, 2005 That looks really great Good job Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Michi Posted September 22, 2005 Share Posted September 22, 2005 I like the first one better, but agree with whomever said that you should make the body beautiful collection text bigger but leave it colored. I don't like the scent name cutting through the pic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prairieannie Posted September 23, 2005 Share Posted September 23, 2005 I agree with Michi. It looks choppy and unfinished in the second one. I would try to make that picture bigger, and add the text directly into the picture before I'd leave it like that. Just to see if that helped. Actually, if it were me, I'd take the picture out completely. But that's just moi! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shell1226 Posted September 30, 2005 Author Share Posted September 30, 2005 Thanks for everyone's input. You are a tremendous help. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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