Please critique my labels

[shell1226]

After a making a few changes based on suggestions from testers, I've changed my labels a little and would like your honest opinions.

[sheila sullivan]

They look really nice...if it were me, I'd make the body beautiful collection bigger..and enlarge that clover picture and maybe put the letters inside the picture...make your text box white if you have a hard time getting the lettering to show.

[RobinInOR]

I like it. It might be more dramatic if something was larger somewhere, like Sheila said. It looks like it's all one size, and your eye isn't drawn to anything special.

Also, just a technical, you need your city,state,zip on your label. If you're in the phone book w/ your biz name - if not, you need your street addy as well.

[shell1226]

Thanks guys. I didn't know that about the street address Robyn. I'll fix that immediately. I will try to make that picture bigger and put the scent name inside and see how that looks. Great idea.

[shell1226]

Is this better?

[mysticglow]

I'm liking that one much better! :highfive: You did good.

[Guest Shell1226 Secret Buddy]

That looks really great Good job

[Michi]

I like the first one better, but agree with whomever said that you should make the body beautiful collection text bigger but leave it colored.

I don't like the scent name cutting through the pic.

[prairieannie]

I agree with Michi. It looks choppy and unfinished in the second one. I would try to make that picture bigger, and add the text directly into the picture before I'd leave it like that. Just to see if that helped. Actually, if it were me, I'd take the picture out completely. But that's just moi!

[shell1226]

Thanks for everyone's input. You are a tremendous help.