flightoffancy Posted April 20, 2007 Share Posted April 20, 2007 I'm redesigning my labels and need opinions. These will be printed on crystal clear labels so I stuck with mostly black.Be honest .... I can take it![ATTACH]11167[/ATTACH] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tangerine Posted April 20, 2007 Share Posted April 20, 2007 I would use a swirlier (is that a word?) font for your F's or maybe the entire "Fragrance Fantasy"? I would also take away the flames on your i's. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jldorrington Posted April 20, 2007 Share Posted April 20, 2007 i agree with the taking away of the flames. it would be different if it was in your company name.also where are you putting your scent name. and i think you should make the net wt smaller i like the way the company name is with the butterflies and everything Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinMom Posted April 20, 2007 Share Posted April 20, 2007 I like the flames It relates to candles, so why not...lol...I agree with making the net weight smaller. And I LOVE the butterflies! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MsDammit Posted April 20, 2007 Share Posted April 20, 2007 I like the flames also, but I don't like the F's-the font or the color. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alajane Posted April 20, 2007 Share Posted April 20, 2007 I guess I'm just too easy to please or too amazed by the design talent some of you have. I love everything about it--the swirlies, butterflies, AND flames!Like jldorrington said, I would make the net weight a smaller font, but I think it's great!Jane Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
debscent Posted April 20, 2007 Share Posted April 20, 2007 I like the flames. I would suggest your website addy be in a plain font. There seems to be something conflicting on your label, I just can't see what it is yet. Love the logo! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buttercup Posted April 20, 2007 Share Posted April 20, 2007 I think it looks great just like you have it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Late Night Posted April 20, 2007 Share Posted April 20, 2007 Hee-hee. Ask a hundred people and get a hundred different answers. I like it all. I like the flame and the butterflies. I really like the star thingy at the end of the capital 'F'. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juggy Posted April 21, 2007 Share Posted April 21, 2007 I like the way it looks. Are you going to write in the fragrance or print? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flightoffancy Posted April 21, 2007 Author Share Posted April 21, 2007 I like the way it looks. Are you going to write in the fragrance or print?The fragrance will be printed on a clear label (return address size) and affixed to the neck of the jar. I use apothecary jars so the neck is pretty tall. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firehouse Posted April 22, 2007 Share Posted April 22, 2007 I would use a swirlier (is that a word?) font for your F's or maybe the entire "Fragrance Fantasy"? I would also take away the flames on your i's.I agree. Maybe a more "dreamy, fairy tale" look to the font. I would also make the weight smaller.When I did mine, my name and the scent were the biggest print on the label. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prairieannie Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 I believe the conflict is that the flames are attached to such a plain font. I love the flames.. they are adorable, but they just don't go with this idea you have going on here.. I'd like to see Fragrance Fantasy done in a Script font and Candles and bath in a complimenting non-script. The tag line done in whatever you use for the Candles and Bath and the rest in something just plain and simple. And the more I look at it, the more I don't think the flames belong on this label. You have a good strong start! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flightoffancy Posted April 23, 2007 Author Share Posted April 23, 2007 Thanks for all of the feedback, it's appreciated and will be taken into consideration when I have time to work on the label some more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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